Sunday, March 27, 2016

Editorial Report B

Here is another section of my Project that I edited.

How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

The final version added a little bit more details that I felt were important for the audience to know.  It helped wrap up the podcast better.

How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

The form didn't really change besides me speaking clearer and with less stuttering of words.

Rough Cut

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5-UfIgWwYUJS3Y0NVlxTFV4Mlk/view?usp=sharing

Re-Edited Selection (first minute and 30 seconds of podcast)

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