Editorial Report A

Now that my project is ready to be released, it is important to go back and look at the changes that were made between the final and rough draft versions.

How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

The final version added a little different mood to the podcast.  The new vocals were more relaxed and conversational which I felt allowed the reader to be more immersed as if I was conversing with them.

How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

There was some format change between the edited version.  I added an intro beat to the beginning of the introduction to reinforce the idea that the listener is listening to a podcast and not just a person talking.


Rough Cut

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5-UfIgWwYUJN09LbnpKZTBrOTQ/view


Re-Edited Selection (first minute and 30 seconds of podcast)

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5-UfIgWwYUJVUE5X25WNkNKc00/view?usp=sharing