Peer review of Jason Boley's essay on its content.
Overall, Jason's essay is well written and he clearly meets the requirements for project 3 as outlined in the rubric. The main thing that I would suggest is to perhaps more explicitly state what you mean by the "compromise" between the various groups that are involved. This would help the reader have a more clear understanding of what exactly the paper is going to be arguing. Also, I would recommend changing the title to something that better states what the paper is about (i.e, the title has no mention of the highway).
I really liked the way that Jason incorporated his sources by having footnotes on each page of which sources he used. I also liked how he included his name and the page number on every page which I need to use in my own essay.
Other than better explaining his paper's argument in the intro, Jason's paper is very well done and researched.
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